This captures things for me, the trends to the larger and more mundane implications. I can’t say whether the intention was speculative of the future, it does feel appropriate at that, but it resonated even more of today and even the past decade.
I like this! You could have the AI cut about 20% of the word count without detracting from the story, it felt like circling the same point in a few spots.
"But deep down, he knew it wasn’t true." is said twice in the same way, was a bit jarring
I'm hoping for more of this story...
This captures things for me, the trends to the larger and more mundane implications. I can’t say whether the intention was speculative of the future, it does feel appropriate at that, but it resonated even more of today and even the past decade.
The art of the gig, vol.... 3?
Nah
I like this! You could have the AI cut about 20% of the word count without detracting from the story, it felt like circling the same point in a few spots.
"But deep down, he knew it wasn’t true." is said twice in the same way, was a bit jarring